I need good lyrics for the song i’m writing any help?
I’m writing a song about losing someone that you were close to, but from a different persons view if that makes sense?! This is what I’ve came up with, is there any I should get rid of & can any one think of any other lyrics?
I don’t know you,
But I know what you’re going through,
You feel like the world’s falling apart beneath your feet,
You lost the only person that really understood you,
You lost your best friend, your hero, you brother,
Pains the only thing that you feel in your heart,
No one can see your falling,
You feel like your all alone,
& you don’t know what to do,
But keep believing,
Cause there’s a light underneath it all,
Yea, is there any lyrics that would sound good? Thanks & I’ll be sure to give points 
OK. First of all. Song writing is fun and also hard work. The basis for a song is an idea, moral or a message that you have and you want to share it with the world through a song. So have a great song IMM (idea, message, moral) Before you begin. Next. You need to select a genre of music that you will be writing in so that you can incorporate lyrics, melodies and rhythm patterns. In your case you need to take the lyrics that you have and put them all in a good ryhming scheme. Your ryhming scheme has alot to do with your genre of music. For insance, southern gospel is very 4 square and contemperary gospel is very repetitive. Pop & R&B music is repetitve and loosely rythmed together.
Hope that helps ya some.
Your Friend,
Danny Ray Bartlett
PS:
NEVER EVER EVER EVER do this again! If you share your lyrics over to millions then they can steal them and you will be out of luck!
Just helping ya!
October 26th, 2009 at 5:56 pm
OK. First of all. Song writing is fun and also hard work. The basis for a song is an idea, moral or a message that you have and you want to share it with the world through a song. So have a great song IMM (idea, message, moral) Before you begin. Next. You need to select a genre of music that you will be writing in so that you can incorporate lyrics, melodies and rhythm patterns. In your case you need to take the lyrics that you have and put them all in a good ryhming scheme. Your ryhming scheme has alot to do with your genre of music. For insance, southern gospel is very 4 square and contemperary gospel is very repetitive. Pop & R&B music is repetitve and loosely rythmed together.
Hope that helps ya some.
Your Friend,
Danny Ray Bartlett
PS:
NEVER EVER EVER EVER do this again! If you share your lyrics over to millions then they can steal them and you will be out of luck!
Just helping ya!
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A few years experiance
October 26th, 2009 at 6:05 pm
I like your idea for the song, it shows you have good imagination, i agree alot with ‘The one’ this is obviously a sad song, and being a song writer myself it always helps to inject as much raw emotion as possible into it, to give that impact, try to think of somebody you lost, and how you felt, that will help you find the right words
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Song writer
October 26th, 2009 at 6:24 pm
my band is having a lyric contest & i think you should join. if you want details about the contest e-mail us at rednoiseband@yahoo.com & ask for details about the contest. we’ll know watcha mean.
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